Philip Thiel ([info]thielpoems) wrote,
@ 2009-04-03 19:00:00
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love poem
I start to write, unsure of what will come
to form these lines, like someone with a drum-
stick experimenting
or some fool scientist inventing
by numbers. Noise
reverberates incessantly; boys
with sushi sit together
or apart. The sudden weather
stays outside
while I - quite vulnerable - sense my pride
collapsing like warm water from a bucket.
Fuck it -
I'll speak before my voice
gets lost, and say: had I the choice
between a brand new start, more things to do
and life together, I'd choose you.




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[info]melonsplash
2009-04-04 10:51 am UTC (link)
That's sweet.

I'll speak before my voice
gets lots, and say:

Did you mean "before my voice gets lost"?

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[info]thielpoems
2009-04-04 10:43 pm UTC (link)
That is what I meant, yes (*changes it*); I'm pleased you liked the poem.

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